Dearleaders:
Hello!
Firstofall,yourhardworktoextendmydeeprespect!thankyoufortakingthetimetoreadmyresume,ihopethisenthusiasm,icanopenadoorofhope.
Mynameisxx,graduatedfromtheyunnanvocationalcollegeofinformationscienceandtechnology08landscapeengineeringtechnology.graduatedinjulyXX,hopingtojoinyourorganizationworkandfutureworktorealizetheirvalue,sotheventurewastorecommendyourorganizationown.
"Realistic,hard-workingandinnovation",ismymotto.i,self-confidence,optimism,couragetomeetallchallenges.althoughiamnowjustanordinarycollegegraduates,buttheyoungismycapital,hardworkismynature,tobemyresponsibility,ifirmlybelievethatsuccesswillbecomeinevitable.inthethreeyearsofuniversitylife,iknowthatknowledgeispower,soinadditiontostudyingexpertise,ialsostrivetoimprovetheprofessionaltheoryandprofessionalskillsforthefutureofworkandexpertisehaslaidasolidfoundation;attheuniversityofthreeyears,ilearnedtheprofessionandrelevantprofessionaltheoreticalknowledge,andcompletedwithhonorstherelevantcourses,practicalworkforthefutureofprofessionalandlayasolidfoundation.rapiddevelopmentintechnologytoday,ifollowedthepaceoftechnologicaldevelopment,andconstantlylearnnewknowledgeandproficiencyinthebasictheoryandapplicationofcomputertechnology,andpassedthenationalhigh-techimageprocessingphotoshopimagevocationalqualificationcertificate,advancedcertificategardener,seniorgardengreenchemicalevidence.moreprofessionalinthelearningprocessnotonlyimprovetheirownprofessionalknowledge,professionalpracticeskillsandenhancemyprofessionalpassionforgardeningprojects.inthemeantime,inmysparetimeselfadministrationofyunnanuniversity,undergraduateeducation,toenhanceandimprovetheirownandcontinuousefforts.
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Finally,isincerelyhopethatyourorganizationcanbenefitdown!
Sincerely,
Salute!
说说我对外企面试英语体验课的感受吧。说实话，在大二的时候，因为专业是学的国际经济与贸易，所以学校特意为我们开设了商务英语写作课程，老师曾经在宝洁工作过，也在美国留学过，而且我们用的教程也是英文原版的商务教材，所以对于一些外企面试英语和一些商务英语方面也算有了初步了解。但是这次在网校的外企面试英语体验课却给了我全新的感受。
这节体验课主要是说外企的求职信应该如何去写。没有专门学习过商务写作的同学可能会觉得，不就是一份短短几页纸的英文求职信，有什么难的？要知道，雅思的essay可是比这个难写多了，我都搞定了，一封小小的求职信，还不是小菜一碟？如果你也是这样认为的，那可就错了。
一份coverletter并不是我们认为的那样容易。首先，在写求职信的时候需要考虑职位是否符合我们的要求，一切都要紧扣jobdescription，一些加分的工作技能也是很有必要的。就是人家要求啥，你就会啥，这样人家才会看你的求职信。如果你会的都是人家不需要的，那么就不会是一封成功的求职信。
求职信的呼语很重要。如果不甚弄错了称呼，HR对应聘者的印象就会大打折扣。对于亲密的朋友如何称呼，正式场合下如何称呼别人，话说我之前还真的'分不清，直接都是dearXXX一语带过。如果不清楚看求职信的人是谁，呼语就不要加职位称呼。
再来说落款，我之前写信都是用YoursXXX，但是听了Dolly老师的系统介绍，我才知道这个称呼落款是私人信件常用的。而在求职信这样比较正式的情况一般不用。并且，英式说法和美式英语的落款说法也是不同的。如果你应聘外企的时候，不知道对方是老美还是老英，最好还是直接用“Sincerely，”比较好。
总之，关系远近、亲属、正式非正式场合的称呼和落款都是不一样的，这一点我以后再也不能小瞧了。说不定，仅仅是因为称呼的错误使用，就导致满盘皆输那就不划算了，所以在这里也希望看文的大家以后可以注意这个问题。
接下来就是求职信中正文的写作了。分为三个小段来写。首先第一段我们要写明应聘职位和获取信息的渠道。要开门见山，这会让HR知道你获取信息的渠道。如果HR知道大部分人都是在哪个地方了解应聘信息，也会方便HR以后加大力度投放广告在那个网站，间接帮助了HR的工作，也会增加HR的好感度。不需要吹嘘HR或者公司什么的，这点和我们中文的求职信有一些不同。一定要表达对职位的强烈兴趣。接下来的一段要介绍工作或者学习的经历。这个经历每个人都不同，把我们自己最擅长的也是和应聘职位密切相关的写上就好，不需要长篇大论。因为我们可以想见，成百上千份简历，HR并没有那么多的时间去看我们的长篇大论，挑重点和职务紧密相关的经历，不仅会使自己脱颖而出，也会增加我们面试的成功率。最后一段，当然要说我们对于职位的渴求，写写未来的期许。
关于正文的求职内容，Dolly老师给了我们一些常用的句型让我们的简历增光添彩。求职信其实是对本人信息的高度概括，听过Dolly老师的讲解，让我受益良多，虽然一节课只有短短的四十分钟，我却受益良多。Dolly老师认真精彩的讲解，还有可爱的CC猫的助阵简单的小测验巩固我们对知识的掌握程度，让我觉得既学到了知识却又不觉得枯燥。真想马上就能继续学习外企面试英语的全部课程，相信对我接下来考BEC也会有很大的帮助。
当然如果想要学好职场英语，在外企面试中脱颖而出，还需要我们自身的努力。学无止境，生命不息，奋斗不止。最后，在这里还要推荐大家使用开心词场背单词，很好用哦！
DearSir,
Iamagraduatein20xx,graduatingfromSouthwesternUniversityofFinanceandEconomics.IwasnoticedyourcompanyislookingforaCFOandIamwritingtocandidateforthisposition.IwasmajorinfinancialmanagementincollegeandminorinBusiness.IstudiedveryhardinschoolandIwasperfectinmycourses.Irankedtopthreeinmycollege.Moreover,Itookpart-timejobsinsummerholidaysandIhadaninternshipinacompanybefore,whichbroughtmegreatpracticalexperience.IknowyourcompanyaimstointernationalizationandIamsurewhatIlearnedinschoolwouldhelpmetobequalifiedtothisposition.Thefollowingismyresumeindetailsthatwillhelpyoutoknowmebetter.I’mlookingforwardtoyourpositivereply.AndBestwishesforyouandyourcompany.
Sincerelyyours,
Christ
Dearleaders:
Thankyouforyourconcernabouttheuseofthevaluabletimeofmycoverletter!
Mynameisxxx，XX，andthisyear's22-year-old，XyearsinXXXXonXXXgraduatedfromtheUniversity，hisloyaltytohonestandreliable;willbeday-to-dayoperationofcomputers,haswonnumerousawardsinthestudentandtoparticipateactivelyinhospitaltheactivitiesofschoolorganizations，haveagoodlifestyleandhighsenseofdisciplineinmind，theawarenessofhigherconsciousness，totheimplementationofgoodorder，astrongsenseofteamwork，hardworkstyle，notafraidofhardship，andthecouragefirstto.theworkofasenseofresponsibilitystrong，andreadytohelpothersonthetasksassignedbythesuperiorsmotivatedandgoodatlearningontheirownhardwork，acertaindegreeofgrass-rootsmanagementexperience.
Ihavelearnedistheprofessionalmanagementofindustrialandcommercialenterprises，butIdonotrigidlyadheretoprofessionalconstraints，ofallwalksoflifearefullofconfidenceandlove.Ofcourse，inthesparetime，IliketodoistoreadtheExerciseandSport.Iliketoseesomekindofinspirationalbooks，likehersparetimeforbasketball，soccerandotherballgames!Ithinkthatthereisnogoodphysicalworkconditionscannotbebackedup，thereisnomoreflexiblemindcannotbe!
Optionalwoodandgoodbirdhabitat，allowdisabledpersonstofriends.Anopportunitytoco-operate，tomeisagoodstart，foryouareawisechoice.IwasaChollima，asyouarepursuingtheabilityandinsighttosuchare-Thehorsesonly.sincerelyhopeyoucangivemeaplaytorealizethevalueoflife，inordertoeffectsocialdevelopmentopportunities.languagecanonlybemovedbythepeopleoftime，theabilitytoproveIcan.Ibelievethatunderyourwiseleadership，inmydiligenceefforts，tomorrowIwillbecomeamemberofyourorganizationbest.Mycredois:Opportunitiesfavoronlythosepeoplewhoarefullyprepared.
Iwishyoueverysuccessforthecause。
DearMrHo
ApplicationforthepositionofFlightAttendant
MyinterestintheabovepositionasadvertisedintheJobsPower.comonJanuary5haspromptedmetosendmyresumeforyourreview.
Ipossesstwoyearsofexperienceinthecustomerservicearea.Asstatedinmyresume,IamcurrentlyemployedasaCustomerCareExecutiveatXYZTelecommunicationsLimited,whereIhavegainedexcellentcommunicationskillsandhavedevelopedgoodpersonalrelationshipswithcustomers.
Iunderstandthatperfectpublicrelationsandsupport,alongwithstronginterpersonalskills,arethebasicrequirementsformaintaininganefficientairlineoperation,pleasantatmosphere,andalsoagoodpublicimage.
Giventheopportunitytodemonstratemytalents,IamconfidentthatIcanmakeanimmediatecontributiontotheflightsystematyourcompany.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yourssincerely
StevenCheung
StevenCheung
Enc.
April13,20xx
RoomxxBuildingxx
TsinghuaUniversity,Beijing100084
Ms.Yang:
IwasreferredtoyoubyMr.Zhang,aPartnerwithyourBeijingoffice,whoinformedmethattheShanghaiofficeofyourcompanyisactivelyseekingtohirequalityindividualsforyourAuditorProgram.
Ihavemorethantwoyearsofaccountingexperience,includinginterningasanAuditorlastyearwiththeBeijingofficeofCCCC.IwillbereceivingmyMBAthisMayfromTsinghuaUniversity.Iamconfidentthatmycombinationofpracticalworkexperienceandsolideducationalexperiencehaspreparedmeformakinganimmediatecontributiontoyourcompany.Iunderstandthelevelofprofessionalismandcommunicationrequiredforlong-termsuccessinthefield.MybackgroundandprofessionalapproachtobusinesswillprovideyourofficewithahighlyproductiveAuditoruponcompletionofyourdevelopmentprogram.
IwillbeintheShanghaiareatheweekofApril16.Pleasecallmeat136001216901toarrangeaconvenienttimewhenwemaymeettofurtherdiscussmybackgroundinrelationtoyourneeds.Ilookforwardtomeetingyouthen.
Sincerely,
ChengDan