【内容提示】
你,北京人,外祖母家在宁波郊区。你18岁时去宁波住了两个月,然后从宁波返回北京。内容要点如下:
①从宁波乘坐汽车到杭州、黄山、南京。这一旅行是你平生最有意义的一次。
②旅程的第一阶段是沿着特别繁忙的公路从宁波到杭州。一路停车两次,下午两点到杭州。
③旅程的第二阶段是从杭州到黄山,约300公里,历时6小时。黄山很美,正如人们所说的,游过黄山不见山。你在黄山呆了两天。
④第三阶段是从黄山到南京,大约也走了6个小时,穿过一些工业区。你在南京逗留了3天,参观了中山陵,玄武湖和南京长江大桥。
⑤最后一个阶段是乘火车从南京到北京,历时16小时到达北京站。你虽然很累,但却很高兴。
【作文示范】
myjourneyfromningbotobeijing
wheniwas18,ivisitedningbo,aseaportonthenortheastcoastofzhejiangprovincefortwomonthsbecausemymother'sfamilylivedthere.istayedinthesuburbs.beforeireturnedtobeijing,itravelledfromningbotohangzhou,huangshanandnanjingbybus.thisjourneywasthemostinterestingjourneyihaveevermade.
thefirststageofthejourneywasfromningbotohangzhoualonganetremelybusyhighway.weleftningboearlyinthemorning.wespenttwohoursonthebusbeforeitstoppedforthefirsttime.whilewewerewaitingatthestop,iboughtafriedcakeandabottleofyogurt①.afterweleftthestop,thescenerybecamebeautiful.ilookedoutofthewindowatricefieldsandgreenmountainsuntilthebusstoppedagainforthepassengerstohavelunch.afterlunchitriedtogotosleep.butiwokeupwheneverthebusbumpedorswayed.wearrivedathangzhouattwoo'clockintheafternoonafterwehadtravelledforeighthours.assoonaswestopped,iwalkedstraighttowestlake.althoughitwasnotmyfirstvisit,istillenjoyeditssceneryverymuch.
thesecondstageofthejourneywasfromhangzhoutohuangshan.thisstagewasabout300kilometresandtooksihours.huangshanisabeautifulareawithhighmountainsandever-greenpinetrees②.thereisacommonsayingthatyouwouldnotliketoseeanyothermountainsafteryouhavevisitedhuangshanmountain.
afterihadspenttwodaysinhuangshanmountain,icaughtanotherbustonanjing.thisthirdstageagaintookaboutsihoursandwetravelledthroughsomeindustrialareas.istayedinnanjingforthreedays.whileiwasstayingthere,ivisiteddr.sunyat-sen'smausoleum③,uanwulakeandthenanjingchangjiangriverbridge.
thefinalstageofmyjourneywasfromnanjingtobeijingbytrain.wehadtravelledforaboutsiteenhoursbeforewereachedourdestination④.iwasehaustedwheniwalkedoutoftherailwaystation,butifelthappybecauseienjoyedthewholejourneyverymuch.
【词语解释】
①yogurt['j+ug+:t]n.酸奶;酸乳酪
②ever-greenpinetree常青的松树
③dr.sunyat-sen'smausoleum[?m&:s+'li+m]孙中山的陵墓
④destination[desti'neim+n]n.目的点;终点
【写法指要】
游记是记述游览经历的'文章,是记叙文的一种类型。写游记和写其他记叙文一样,要以时间先后顺序安排结构,内容应有详有略。本文按时间顺序分为四个阶段,第一阶段详述,其余略述。
Lastsummervacation,myfamilyandIwenttoQingdaobytrain。Therewasalwayssunshineandfreshair,whichmadeussocomfortable。Wewenttotheseaside,theseawasasblueasthesky,andbathinginthesunshineonthebeach,wasreallyanenjoyablething。
Ialsopickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister。
Thereweboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirs,Iwasplaningtosendthemtomyfriends。Weatemanytingsthere,suchasfish,prawn,andsoon。Theyareverydelicious。Thenwelivedinacleanandtidyhotel,andthepricewasnotsoexpensive。
IlikeQingdaoverymuch,andifIgotachance,Ihopetocomehereagain,itissuchabeautifulandinterestingplace。
IamgoingtoHawaiiforvacation.IamgoinginDecember,andIamstayingforthreeweeks.Hawaiiiscomprisedofachainof132islands.WeusuallythinkoftheeightmainislandswhenwethinkofHawaii.Thisisnotsurprisingastheother124islandsonlytotalabout3squaremilesinlandarea.Hawaiiishomeoftheworld'smostactivevolcano,thecraterofKilaueaonMaunaLoa.Sandybeaches,toweringvolcanoes,andlushvalleyslurethousandsoftouristseachyeartothistropicalparadise.Hawaiiisthemostethnicallyandraciallydiversestateofanystateintheunion,amixthatincludesCaucasians,AmericansofJapanesedescent,andPolynesians,amongothers.NativeHawaiianshaveheldontomanyoftheircustomsandtraditionsdespitetheinfluxofnon-nativesovertheyears.Hawaiiistheonlystatethathasanofficialnativelanguage.StatehoodhadbeenproposedmanytimesthroughoutHawaii'shistory,butitwasnotuntil1959thatHawaiibecamethe50thstateoftheUnitedStates.
Withthegeneralstandardoflivingimprovingandtheworkingweekbecomingshorter,moreandmorepeopleareabletomakeaholidaytriptoplacesofinterest.Whilemanyliketojoinpackagetoursfroconvenience,Iprefertotravelonmyown.
Iliketravellingonmayownnotonlybecauseitcostsmuchlessbutbecauseitgivesagreatdegreeofindependenceandfreedom.Travellingonmyown,I’mmyownboss;andcandecidewhentostartonmyway,wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedovertosaveenergyortimeforanotherspot.Icanalwaysadjustmyplan.Onthecontrary,inapackagetouryou’redeprivedofasmuchfreedomasinamilitarybase.Atthesoundofthewhistle,youhavetojumpupfromasoundsleepand,withheavy-liddedeyes,hurrytothegatheringplacewhereyouarecollectedandcountedtoboardacoach.Atthesightofthelittleflagwaving,youmustimmediatelytakeyourselfawayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhosesoleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohimstrictschedule,regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.
True,youmayencounterinconveniencesifyoutravelindividually,forinstance,gettingaccommodationsforthenightandfindingaplaceformeals.Butnothingcanbecomparedwiththefreedomwhichisvitaltoapersonwhotakesaholidaytripmainlytoescapefromconstraintsofhisroutinelife.
随着生活的标准、工作时间的缩短,越来越多的人能够对旅行感兴趣。而许多人觉得方便想参加旅行团,我喜欢自己去旅行。
我喜欢自已旅行,可不仅因为它的价格要便宜得多,且它给了很大程度上的独立和自由。我独自去旅游,我是自己的老板;可以决定什么时候出发上路,在那里逗留更长一点的时间,可以跳过了一个景点节省精力和时间。我可以调整我的计划。相反,在旅游团的话你可能被剥夺自由。在口哨的声音下,你要从酣睡中跳起来,眯着眼睛,赶紧去聚集的地方。在想逗留的地方,你必须让自己远离你你感兴趣的场景,必须他严格按照导游的时间表,无论天气或你的健康状况。
当然,如果你单独旅行,你可能会遇到麻烦,例如,住宿过夜,找地方吃饭。但没有什么可以和一个人度假旅行相比的啦,为了逃避日常生活的约束,自由比较重要。