建议:
首先我们需要知道,该文主题是工作与家庭哪个更重要。面对这种无法选择的问题,我们需要采取一个中庸的态度,也就是无论是工作还是家庭,我们都得重视。然后分别阐述两者的重要性,最后再总结。
要点提示:
1、理解题意,抓住重心。
2、第一段,引出话题。该文主题工作和家庭哪个更重要。
3、第二段,一一阐述。这种问题,可以先阐述工作的重要性,接着阐述家庭的、重要性。
4、第三段,总结全文。说明两者都缺一不可,我们需要好好调节工作与家庭的关系。
参考例文:Careerandfamily
Whenitcomestotheopinionofcareerandfamily,peoplealwaysholddifferentideas、Somepeopledeemitmoreimportanttopursuetheircareer,whileotherpeoplearguethatfamilyisthemostimportantinone’slife、
Ontheonehand,thereisnodoubtthatcareerplaysakeyroleinourlife、Intheveryfirstplace,careergivesusanaimtoliveonandmakesourlifefulfillment、Withoutcareer,muchofourlivingtimewillbecertainlyboring、What’smore,careercanprovideuswithameanstoliveon、Mostpeopleearntheirincomefromajobtomakealive、Ontheotherhand,familyisalsoanindispensablepartoflife,asmanypeoplewilladmit、Familyisalwaysregardedasaplacewherewecanescapefrompressureinlife,andwecanfeelwormwithfamily、Inaddition,wecanobtainasenseofbelongingtofromfamily、Withoutit,anyonewillfeellonelyanddesperate、
AsfarasIamconcerned,careerandfamilyarenotinoppositiontoeachother、Wecanconcentrateonourjobwhenweareworking,andwecanspendahappytimewithourfamilywhenweareoffduty、Thereforetheycanenhanceeachothersothatone’slifecanbecomebetterandbetter、
Hello,everyone!TodayIwanttotalkaboutmyfamily、Ihaveahappyfamily、Therearefourpeopleinit、Theyaremyfather,mymother,mybrother,andI、Myfather‘sworkisanEnglishteacher、HeworksatNo、1PrimarySchool、Look!Thisismymother、Sheisamanage、Mybrotherisastudent、Ilikemyfamily!
Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshavetakenlaceinthepeople'sdailyexpensesinXi'anfrom1995to1999、Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoseonclothingandrecreationhaveincreasedrespectivilyby9%and7%、Thestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtooneanother、
Therearetwofactorsaccountingforthesechanges、Developmentineconomyisanessentialoneinthefiveyears、Theincreasedincomeresultingfromeconomicgrowthplaysanimportantpartintheleexpenseonfood、Hence,asmallpercentageoftotalincomeisenoughtocoverfoodexpense、Anotheroneisthechangesinlifestyle、Whenfoodspresentsnoworrytotheaverage,peoplebegintofocusmoreofinterestonhandsomeappearanceandhappyleisuretime、Asaresultofsuchashift,spendingonclothingandrecreationincreasedyearafteryear、FromJoozone、com、
Fromtheanalysesmadeabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthatpeople'slivingstandardsinXi'anhavebeenconstantlyimprovedbetween1995and1999、Withthefurthergrowthineconomyandmorechangesinlifestyle,thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthetablewillcontinueinthebetterdirection、
Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife、Takemyfamilyforexample、
Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast、ButnowweCalllongdistanceathome、Andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation、ButnowwegetthenewsbywatchingTV、Anotherbigchangeisinmylivingconditions、Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfiirniture、Butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment、Inshort,ourlifehasbecomecomfortableandconvenient、
Jimsfamily
吉姆的家庭
小作者的桌上有一张吉姆一家的照片,小作者介绍了照片上的每一个人,以及他们各自的、工作。
Apictureisonmydesk、ThisisapictureofJimsfamily、ThemanisJimsfather、AwomanisbehindJim、Sheishismother、Theyareteachers、Agirlisinthepicture,too、SheisJimssister、HernameisKateGreen、Jimandhissisterareinthesameschool、TheyareEnglish、
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一幅画是我的桌子上。这是吉姆的家人的照片。这名男子是吉姆的父亲。一个女人的背后是吉姆。她是他的母亲。他们是教师。一个女孩是在画面她是上,她是吉姆的妹妹。她的名字是凯特格林。吉姆和他的姐姐都在同一所学校。他们是英国人
proudofyourself;whenyoufail,nevergiveup、Pleasesmiletofaceyourlife、Ifyoudothis,youwillfindtheskymoreblue;theseamoregreen…、、Yourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter!
OnedaymygrandmotherandIwenttothepark,itbegantorainwhenwegotthere、Somepeopleweredisappointed,butmygrandmothersmiled:"itisgoodtorain,itwillwaterthefield,andthecropswillgrowbetter、Ithinkso、Ifwecanchangeourmindtoseethethings,wewilldiscoverallthingsarebeautiful、Ineveryone'slife,themoodisveryimportant、Itcanencourageunsuccessfulpeoplenottoloseheart,tomakesadpeoplefeelbetter、AtlastIwanttosay,ifyouenjoylife,youwillbehappyforever、
Mysisterhasbeenonthejuniorhighschool,shehastogetupatsixmore,whenIgetupeverydaysowhenallcouldnotseeher,theeldersistermyhomeworkisverygood,Ihavenoquestions,shewillbeverypatienttoteachme、Mybrotherhowdidn'tgotothekindergartenclassateighto'clockinthemorningeveryday,sometimesIgotoclasswhenheisstillinbed!
Myfatherandmotherareallveryconcernedaboutme,Idon'twork,wouldthey??I,butalsoteachmehowtodoalotofhousework、
Ilikemyfamilybecausemomanddadareverylovemealsoveryconcernedaboutme,althoughmymotherisveryfierce,IexamwillbepunishedwhenI'mbad,butIknowtheyaregoodforme、I'minabadmood,theywillaskmewhatis,whyisthemoodbad?
Ithinkmyfamilyisverywarmandhappy,soIlovemyfamilyandthefamily、
Thereismuchcontroversytodayaboutwhethertelevisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfamilyandfriends、Somepeoplearguethatthecommunicationisbaffledbytelevision、Otherscriticizethattelevisionimprovetherelationshipoffamilyandfriends、Itotallyagreewiththelatterone、
WatchingTVisatimeforthewholefamilytostopfromwhatevertheyaredoingtogettogether、WhilewatchTV,theystarttotalkaboutthecontentofthemovie,whichisalsoakindofcommunication、ImaginingtheTVdisappears,wewoulddoreadinginrooms,whileourfamilywoulddolaundry,dowashingdishorgoingshopping、Itsimplyprovidesachanceforustostaytogether、
Inaddition,theTVsuppliesuswithmuchinformation,whichwehavenotknowninourdailylives、SomeoftheconstructivemoviesshowonTV,likeafamilystory,alovestory,orsoon,reinforcetherelationshipofafamilyandfriends、What'smore,welearnfromthestorythatitisimportanttocherishthebroilingofafamilyandfriends、
Atlast,itisakindofrecreationthatafamilyorfriendscanchoosetohave、Communicationcanbeundertakenbymanymeans,forexample,goingshoppingtogether,enteringabar,talkingintimatelyaboutourselves、Ineffect,watchingTVisawaytoletustogetherandshareourhappinesswitheachother、
Inmyopinion,TVprovidesusopportunitytobetogetherandcommunicate、Inthisdiversifiedsociety,TVdoesn'tdestroycommunicationamongusbutshowusanotherwayofgettingtogether、
myhousecontainfourpeople,havingmethedaddyrespectively,mymama,mygrandmother,alsohaveme!
welivetogetherveryhappy!butouroccupationsarealldifferent、myfatherdoesdepartmentoffinancialanalysistodoafinancework,mymotheralsodoesafinanceworkinthedepartmentoffinancialanalysis,somyhousehas2tocomputeagoodpersontohold!
mydaddyisaworkinsamelythehospitalwithmymama!stillhadmethegrandmothertoalsoworkatthehospitalbeforeof,sheistobeanurse,howeverretirednow!
althoughmygrandmotheratordinarytimesveryoverelaborate,verybigdoctor!butshealsowritestothinkforourhealthybodiesverymuch!butibejustaninsidelearnofstudent!myhouseisahappyfamily!