Firsthereisourfavoriteplaceourbeautifulgardenmanytreesandmanyflowersinit.Thenyoucangointoit.Now,youknowwhyweloveitright.wecanwriteredandchatinit.(tellyouasecret:Ilikeitbecauseitiscoolinsummerandwarminwinter
Now,Iwilltellyoumoreaboutmyfriends&teachers.Overhereteachersarefriendlytous,soweneversayabadwordaboutthem.Becauseofthese,studentscangetgoodgradesatmyschool.(Wouldyouliketocome?)
Ithinkmyschoolisoneofthebestschoolsintheworld.Becausewehavegoodteachersgoodstudentsandeverythingisbeautiful.Ilikeit,everyatitlikesit.
Iamagirl/boy.MynameisJiajia.IamapupilinShenyang.IlikeEnglishverymuch,andIlikesinging,too.Igotoschoolfivedayseveryweek.Myschoolisnotfarfrommyhome,anditisaniceschool.Thereare100teachersand1000studentsinmyschool.Thereare25classesinmyschool.MyChineseteacheristall,myEnglishteacheristall,too.Ilovethemalot.Welcometomyschool.178
Myschoolisintheeastendofthecity.Ittakesmehalfanhourtogettoschoolonfoot.Iusuallyrideabiketoschool.
Thereareoveronehundredandfiftyteachersandabouttwothousandstudentsinourschool.Wehavetwoclassroombuildings.Theofficebuildingisthreestoreyshigh.Onweekdaysourteachersoftentakeustothelaboratoriestodoexperiments.SometimeswehaveEnglishlessoninthelanguagelab.Wehaveaverylargeplayground.
Afterschoolwetakepartinvariousactivities,suchasballgames,painting,singinganddancing.Iliketoplayfootballwithmyclassmates.
Ilovemyteachers.Ilovemyschool.
注释:
1)intheeastendofthecity在城市的东部
2)classroombuilding教学大楼
3)officebuilding办公大楼
4)threestoreyshigh三层楼高
5)languagelab语言实验室
6)takepartinvariousactivities参加各种各样的活动
Ourschoolisinthecentercity.Therearesixgradesandthirtyclassesinit.Thenumberofstudentsismorethantwothousand.Wehavetwoteachingbuildings,abiglibrary,andalargeplaygroundtheremanytreesandniceflowersintheschool.Weoftenkeepitcleananditlooksbeautiful.
Weloveourschool!
我们学校在中心城市聚集六年级和30个班级,学生人数超过二千。我们有两栋教学楼,一个大的图书馆和一个大操场,有许多树和漂亮的花种植在学校,我们总是保持干净,让学校看起来很漂亮。
我们爱我们的学校!
AnIntroduction
Ourschoolwasbuiltin1945andagreatnumberofstudentshavegraduatedfromit.Nowmanyofthemhavebecomescientists,professorsandengineers.Manystudentshavealsobecomeworkersandfarmersaftergraduation.Theyhaveachievedgreatsuccessinthedevelopmentofmodernindustryandagriculture.
Ourschoolisakeymiddleschoolinourprovince.Ithasthirtyclasseswithover130students.Ourschoolhasasix-storeyedteachingbuilding,severallaboratoriesandalargeplayground.Lastyear,anewlibrarywasbuiltandithasmorethan1000copiesofbooks.
Alltheteachersherearetryingtheirbesttodotheirworkwell.Everystudentsismakingfulluseofhistimetotrainhimselftobeaqualifiedstudent.
【评语】
文章简洁得体,结构鲜明,语言流畅,介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。
school还有学派的意思,另外“一群鱼”叫做aschooloffish.