DearWeiFang,
IhearthatyouhavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestofMiddleSchoolStudents,soImwritingtogivemysincerecongratulations.YoudontknowhowexcitedIwaswhenIheardthegoodnews.Asyourbestfriend,Iamproudofyou!YourpronunciationandfluentEnglishleftmewithdeepimpression.Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthecontest.CouldyousharewithmehowyouimproveyourspokenEnglish?Yourexperiencewillbeofgreathelptomeinlearning.
Iwillbegratefulifyoucanwritemebackandgivemeyouradvice.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
篇感谢信
Dear______,
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudefor________(感谢的原因).Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein_________(对方给你的具体帮助),IfearthatIwouldhavebeen_________(没有对方帮助时的后果).
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho__________(给出细节).
Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!Pleaseacceptmygratitude.
Yourssincerely
LiMing
篇英语写信作文篇(*)篇
Dear_______,
Iam.(自我介绍)IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout_______.
Thereasonformydissatisfactionis_______(总体介绍).Inthefirst
place,_________(抱怨的第一个方面).Inaddition,____________(抱怨的第二个方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit___(感觉)to___________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucould________(提出建议和请求),preferably__________(进一步的要求),andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby______(设定解决事情最后期限).ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely
LiMing
篇DearMercy,
Howiseverythinggoing!LasttimeyousaidyouareanxiousnowbecauseyoufindithardtolearnEnglishwell.Dontworry.IthinkyouhavetoimproveyourEnglishstepbystep.AndIwillrightbehindyou.Inmyview,youshoulddevelopyouinterestonEnglishfirst.
Accordingtomyexperience,IthinkwatchingEnglishmovie,listentosomewonderfulEnglishsongsandtalkinEnglishontheInternetwouldbehelpful.Secondly,youhavetopreparelessonsbeforeclassthatwillhelpyouunderstandwhattheteachersaysintheclass.
Iknowyoufeelboredintheclass,butyouhaveforceyourselftobeconcentrated.AfewdayslateryouwillfeelitalittleeasytolearnEnglish.TheleftstepsIwilltellnexttime.
Bytheway,wehavenotseeneachothersinceyourfamilymovetoHunanayearago.HaveyoueverthoughtaboutgoingbacktovisitmeandlearnEnglishtogetherinthecomingSummervacation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Bestwishes,
Sally
篇道歉信
Dear____,
Iamtrulysorrythat_______(道歉的原因).
Thereasonisthat______(介绍原因)Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.
Yourssincerely
LiMing
邀请信
Dear____,
Therewilla_____(内容)at/in______(地点)on____(时间).Wewouldbehonoredtohaveyoutherewithus.
Theoccasionwillstartat_______(具体时间).Thiswillbefollowedbya____(进一步的`安排).Ataround______(时间),__________(另一个安排)
Ireallyhopeyoucanmakeit.RSVPbefore______(通知你的最后期限)
Yourssincerely
LiMing
篇投诉信
Dear_______,
Iam.(自我介绍)IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout_______.
Thereasonformydissatisfactionis_______(总体介绍).Inthefirst
place,_________(抱怨的第一个方面).Inaddition,____________(抱怨的第二个方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit___(感觉)to___________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).
Iappreciateitverymuchifyoucould________(提出建议和请求),preferably__________(进一步的要求),andIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby______(设定解决事情最后期限).ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely
LiMing
篇Dearmyfriend,
Iamherewritingtoyourtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforcongratulation.Youmentionedhowtoimprovethetranslationability.NowIwouldliketoofferyousomesuggestions.Themostimportantfactortobeconsideredisthatyoumustgraspalarge.bankofvocabulary,whichisthefoundationfortranslation.Secondly,youcantrytopracticetranslationeveryday.Afteryourtranslation,youcancompareyourtranslationwiththegivenanswer.Lastbutnottheleast,youmustpayverycloseattentiontothedifferencebetweenthetwolanguages.Differencesbetweenlagugesmustbeconsideredwhenyouaretranslating.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.Then,wecanhaveatalkfacetoface.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbeconstructivetoyou.
Trulyyours
篇DearJane,
Hello!Iamsorrytohearthatyouthinkyouowngetfat.Don'tworry,Iwillgaveyousomeadvice,andIhopeitcanhelpyou.
First,youneedkeephealthyeating.Suchaseatenoughvegetableandfruit.Andsomeapplesandlemonscanhelpyoufarawayfromfat.
Second,you'dbetterdosomeexerciseinyourfreetime.Runningisagoodchoosethatnotonlymakeyouhealthy,butalsogiveyouagoodmood.
Lastbutnotleast,youshoulddrinkenoughwater.Weoftenforgetthatitisimportantinourbusylive,butrememberwaterisgoodforourhealth,andhelpyouprotectgetfat.
Bestwishestoyou.
Yours,
LiHua
篇DearMr.Seaton,
ThankyouverymuchfortakingmewithyouonthatsplendidoutingtoLondon.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadseentheToweroranyoftheotherfamoussights.IfIdgonealone,Icouldnthaveseennearlyasmuch,becauseIwouldnthaveknownmywayabout.
Theweatherwassplendidonthatday,whichIthoughtwasrare.IstillremembersomepeopletoldmethatinBritaintherewasweatherandnoclimate.Duringthesameday,itmightsnowinthemorning,rainatnoon,shineintheafternoonandbewindybeforethenightfalls.SoIthinkIwaslucky.
Ithinktherivertripwasthebestthingofall.LondonreallycamealiveformeaswesawitfromtheThamesduringthatwonderfuljourneydowntoGreenwich.Itwasalltremendouslyexciting-adaythatIshallneverforget.
Thankyouforgivingmesuchagreatbirthdaytreat.
Yourssincerely,
LindaChen
篇英语书信作文篇(*)篇
英语写信优秀范文篇1
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringtheweek-longholiday.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesuggestiongivenbelowinChinese:
1.表示欢迎
2.提出对度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
ALettertoaSchoolmate
June23,2001
DearXiaoWang,
__________________________________
__________________________________
__________________________________.
Yours,
ZhangYing
从上面的例子可见,书信作文不仅给出正文部分的内容的提纲,而且还给出书信各部分的结构的框架。也就是说,我们只要考虑如何表达提纲部分的内容,而不用考虑书信的结构。
在写书信作文时,首先要把书信正文的提纲内容细化,扩展成更细的英文提纲,然后用简洁、明了、礼貌、正确和得体的语言表达出细化了的提纲内容。例如前面的那封信就可以列出下面的提纲:
Topic:ALettertoaSchoolmateQuestion:Whataretheholidayarrangementsandpointsforattention?
Outline:I.ExtendingmywelcomeII.Holidayschedule1.1stday–campus2.2ndday–theartgallery&musichall3.3rdday–mountainclimbing4.next3days–otherplacesofinterest(SwanCave,GoldenLake)5.Lastday--departureIII.Pointsforattention1.Trainnumber&timeofarrival2.SunglassesIV.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou.IntroductionBody1Body2Conclusion
范文:
ALettertoASchoolmate
June23,2001
DearXiaoWang,
Imverygladtolearnthatyouregoingtovisitmeduringtheweek-longholiday.Myparentswillalsobehappytoseeyouagain.Iamsureyouwillenjoyeveryminutehere.
Ihavearrangedourschedulefortheholidayasfollows.Onthefirstdayyouarrive,Illshowyouaroundourcampus.Onthesecondday,wellvisittheartgalleryandthemusichall.Nextday,wellclimbahillinthenortheasternpartofthecity.Onthetopofthehill,wecanhaveawonderfulbirdseyeviewofthecity.Duringthenextthreedays,wellmakesomeshorttripstosomeplacesofinterestnearby,suchastheSwanCave,theGoldenLake,etc.Onthelastday,Illseeyouoffattherailwaystation.
PleaseremembertocallandtellmeyourtrainnumberandtimeofarrivalsothatIcanmeetyouattherailwaystation.Bytheway,itsveryhothereandwehavealotofsunshine,sodontforgettowearyousunglasses.
Imlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.
Sincerelyyours,
ZhangYing
写信日期称呼正文第一段:表示欢迎正文第2段:活动安排第一天的安排第二天的安排第三天的安排第4-6天的安排第七天:送行正文第三段(注意事项):注意事项一注意事项二结束语结尾礼词签名
上面举的是私人信件的例子,下面我们再来看一封投诉信(LetterofComplaint)。
投诉信的目的是为了让收信人读信后同情你的遭遇,解决你所遇到的问题。所以写投诉信时应该实事求是地反映情况,注意措辞,不使用过多的讽刺或责备的语言,也不要因为发泄怒气而离题,以避免引起收信人的不信任或反感。
一般而言,投诉信包括以下内容:提出要求和理由;解释详细的情况;把请求具体化以及希望收信人采取行动的日期等。例如:
September1,2001
DearSirorMadam:
ImwritingtocomplainaboutatypewriterIboughtsevenmonthsago.
InFebruaryof2001IboughtaJonesTypewriter,PortableSpecialModel,atABCStore,Ihaduseditonlyafewdayswhenthespacebarbroke.
Itookittoalocalshop,theytoldmeitwasfactorydefectandsuggestItakeitbacktoABC.ABCacceptedthemachineandsentthepartin.Iwaitedthreemonths,andsinceyourcompanydidnotsendareplacement,theyletmehavethespacebarfromanothertypewriter.
Now,sixmonthslater,ithasbrokenagain.ItookitbacktoABC.Theyarenolongercarryingyourtypewriter,buttheyassuredmethattheguaranteeisstillgoodandsuggestedthatIwriteyouforfurtherinstructionsastowhatstepstotake.
Iwillappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpusonthismatter.
Respectfully,
(Signature)
JamesBergen
写信日期称呼正文第一段:表明写信的目的正文第二段:具体说明购买产品的时间、地点及出现的问题第三段:说明尝试的解决方法第四段:说明尝试的解决方案无效,请求帮助结尾礼词签名打印的姓名
这是一封态度冷静、措辞有理、有节的投诉售后服务不周的信。由于这类信涉及经销商(厂家)和卖方,因此,投诉信中写明了以下详细的情况:
1)购物的时间:InFebruaryof2001
2)购物地点:atABCStore
3)产品型号:JonesTypewriter,PortableSpecialModel
4)使用时间:Ihaduseditonlyafewdays;sixmonthslater
5)主要问题:Thespacebarbroke
6)产生问题的原因:factorydefect
7)为什么向你方反映:
Theyarenolongercarryingyourtypewriter,buttheyassuredusthattheguaranteeisstillgoodandsuggestedthatIwriteyouforfurtherinstructionsastowhatstepstotake.(商店已没有贵公司的打字机,但他们让我相信,保修卡仍有效,并建议我写信给贵公司以寻求解决办法)
此外,写信人还用了礼貌的结束语:
Iwillappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpusonthismatter.(贵公司在这件事上给我的任何帮助都将令我不胜感激)
小结:1)英文书信的结构;2)书信作文的出题形式;3)书信作文的写作要领。
下面我们进行写作练习。我将给大家一个作文题,请大家根据这一讲的内容,在30分钟内完成。大家在写作的过程中要注意审题,考虑文章的结构、采用的起首语和结束语等。