定句型,连词成句
这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:
(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inordertodo或soastodo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。
(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。
(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooksstrongbutinfact,heisratherweak.
(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptverylate.应该写成:Shewenttobedverylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的'英语”,不可写成:HeisnotalittleworriedabouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:HeisnotabitworriedabouthisEnglish.或:HeisnotworriedabouthisEnglishatall.
连词成句,添减相宜
单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
即:文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:
(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。
(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。
(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。
尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。
检查,修改,定稿,誊写
检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:
(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。
(2)体裁格式对不对。
(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。
(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。
(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。
经典题例
下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文篇
OnHabits
1.不同的人有不同的习惯
2.个人习惯与公共卫生的关系
3.你的看法
Whenitcomestohabits,itisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentindividualhasdifferenthabits.Somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking,whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes.Atthesametime,somepeoplelivetheirliferegularlyandareactivelyinvolvedinallkindsofsports,othersliketoplaycardsdeepintonightsandeverythingaroundthemisinatotalmess.
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ononehand,goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth,thatistosay,withoutgoodhabits,publichealthcan’tbeguaranteed.Onanotherhand,infectiousdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits.AgoodcaseinpointisthatterriblediseaseslikeaidsandSarsspreadthroughindividualswithbadhabitswhoeitherspitinpublicplacesordisposetrasheverywhere.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Icansafelycometotheconclusionthatitishightimeweplacedemphasisonimprovingpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Forexample,goinginforsportsinsteadofsittingallthetime,livingregularlyarepracticalwaystosolvetheproblem.Inshort,ifyoumindyourmannersandbehaveyourselfwell,theprospectwearelookingforwardtowillbebothbrightandencouraging.
Dearstudents,
Asweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives。So,weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe。Wemustn’tbringrestrictedknivesorthingstoourschoolbecausethesethingsmaycauseseriousproblems。Donothaveabathinriversorpondsbyourselveswithoutourparents’permission。And,weshouldbefriendlytootherssofightingisstronglybanned。Makesurethatweshouldalwayspayattentiontothetrafficonourwaytoschoolorhome。Furthermore,ifwemeetsomeemergency,wemustcallforhelpfromthepoliceorourteachers。Inaword,followingthesesafetiesrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace。
Yours,
LiHua
Loveisoftheutmostimportancetoushumans.Everybodynotonlyneedslove,butalsoshouldgiveotherslove.Ascanbeseeninthepicture,"loveisalampwhichisbrighterindarkerplaces."Thisisindeedtrue.Peopleindarkerplacesneedmorelightthanotherpeople.Maybeevenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlife.Maybejustathreadoflightwillcallforththeirstrengthandcouragetohelpthemstepoutoftheirdifficulties.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationofthisideathanthefollowingexamples.(Numerousexamplescanbegiveneasily,butthesewillsufficeForinstancewhensomeoneisstarvingtodeath,justalittlefoodandwaterfromyoumaysavehis(her)life.Again,whenalittlegirlinapoorruralareadropsoutofschoolbecauseofpoverty,justasmallsumofmoneyfromyoumaysupporthertofinishschoolandchangeherlife.Inthesecircumstancesyouhavegivenlovewhichislikealampinadarkplacewherelightismostneeded.Tosumup,weshouldofferourhelptoalltheneeded.Weexpecttogetlovefromothersandwealsogivelovetoothers.Sowhenyouseesomeoneindifficultyorindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogiveyourlovetohim(her).Ibelievethattherelationshipbetweenpeoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetterplaceforustolivein.
Iloveeatingice-lolly,nomatterinthehotsummerorthecoldwinter.Thefeelingsaresodifferenteatingice-lollyinthetwoseasons.Insummer,theweatherissohotthatIdon'twanttoeatanything,exceptfortheice-lolly.Ioftenbuyalotofice-lolliesintherefrigeraterandIusuallyeattenbarsaday.Whentheicewaterflowintothethroat,IfeelmywholeworldisicyandIfeelthatIamrescuredfromthehotday.However,inthecoldwinter,it'ssodifferent.Eatingice-lollyinthecoldwinterwillmakeyoufeelcolder.Whenyoueating,youwouldshakebecauseofthecoldness.Itseemsthatyouarefrozen.Butit'stheexcitingfeelingIlike.
不管冬天夏天,我都喜欢吃冰棒,这两个季节吃感觉很不一样。夏天的时候,天气非常热,除了冰棒,我没胃口吃其他东西。我经常买很多放在冰箱里,一天吃十根。当冰水从喉咙流过,我感觉整个世界都冰凉了,我从大热天里解放出来了。而在冬天时,感觉就不同了,大冬天吃冰棒让你感觉更冷了,好像整个人都冰冻了,但这种刺激的感觉正是我喜欢的。
高考英语话题作文:诚实、诚信
按下列要求写一篇作文。
1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信的现象;
2、举一例说明(如,有毒奶粉、冒名顶替上大学、考试作弊等);
3、讲求诚信的意义。
AlmostallofusheardthestoryHereComestheWolfwhenwewerelittlekids.Whatwecanlearnfromthestoryisthatwemustbehonest.However,thererelotsofphenomenaofdishonestynowadays.
Beingdishonestdoesgreatharmnotonlytootherpeoplebutalsotoyourself.Takethecaseoffakemilkpowderforexample.Afterdrinkingthiskindofmilk,thebabieshadbigheadswhiletheirlegsandarmswerestillthin,whichbadlyaffectedtheirhealth.Toourgreatrelief,theproducersgotaccusedandpunishedforalltheseriousconsequencesintheend.
Havingthereputationofbeinghonestandreliablewillmakeotherpeopletrustyou,whichwillprovideyoumanybenefitsandgiveyouopportunitiesthatothersmaynotget.Beinghonest,youwillfinditeasiertocooperatewithothersandpeoplewillbefriendlytoyouandsupportyou.Inasense,iflifeisalongjourney,honestywillbethebackpackthatshouldbetakenalongalltheway.
LoveinCampus
Nowadays,campusloveispopular.Somecollegeteachersarguethatstudentsshouldgiveuploveforthesakeoflearning.Theymaintainthatloveistimeconsumingandinfluencesone’slearning.Somestudents,however,holdthatastudentwhofallsinlovewillstudyharderandwillmakegreaterprogress.Theydon'tbelievethatapersoninlovelagsbehindinhisstudies.
Therearedifferentkindsofloveoncampus.Somestudentsregardloveaskillingtimeoraddingcolor;somearepragmatic,thinkingit'sdifficulttofindabetterpartneraftergraduation;thepurposeofothersisforseekingtheimpetusofstudy.Anyhow,farawayfromhomeandalone,seekingfriendship,understandingandlove,theboysandgirlseasilyfindcomfortandappreciationfromoneanother.
Asamateroffact,loveisasharpdouble-bladedknife.Havingitwillmakeyouveryhappy;whilelosingit,youalwaysfeeldisappointedanddepressed.Whenthebondoflovebroken,goingonstudyingasusualorsinkinglamentorevenbeingcrazydependonus.Wewillnotletromanticentanglementinterferewithourstudies.
Loveisanaturalandquiet.Duringtheprocessoflovewewillexperienceromanticlove,frustratingloveandcriticalloveandreallove.Truelovewillovercomeourpainanddismay,warmourheart,andsparkourspiritwithdelightforcesbutnotresistance.
1、诚信
(安徽蚌埠)目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因:1.考试太滥2.自身勤奋不够3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议:1、作弊有害;2、要做人诚实,学习发奋;3、学校应减少考试。
要求:1、字数80-100;2、围绕要点可适当发挥;3、文章开头已给出,不计入总字数。
Atpresent,anumberofmiddleschoolstudentshavepickedupabadhabit--cheatinginexaminations.
参考作文篇
Dearteacher,
Howtimesflies!Ihavetosaygoodbyetoyounow.Thankyou,mydearteacher.
Youreoneofthebestteachersinourschool.Youteachussowell.Youoftenhelpmewithmystudies.WhenImintrouble,youalwaysgivegoodadvice.Withyourhelp,Ivemademuchprogressinmystudies.Imluckytobeyourstudent.
Illneverforgetyou.NomatterwhereImgoing,wellbetogetherforever.
Bestwishes
Yours,
Robert/Emma