Howenlighteningandcompellingtheabovedrawingis!Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelpthinking:_____.（这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的）______while_______.（这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词）Simpleasitlooks,itsintendedmeaninggoesfardeeperwhatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyaimtoconvey.
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Whattheimageabovevividlymirrorsgoesfarmorethanasimpleimage,instead,itcarriesathoughtprovokingsocialphenomenon:____.（本文的主旨）Thereareupsetting（如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除）parallelstodayinourcontemporarycommunity.Forexample,______.（举2个例子，如果字数够就举1个）
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Muchcanbedone.Tobeginwiththeschoolsandthemassmediashoulddevelop,guideandcultivatenobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeople,doingtheirutmosttoawakenpeopleofthegrowingthreatofthisworseningsituation.（ofthisworseningsituation自己可以换成主旨的词，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）Whatismore,theauthoritiesconcernedshouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwideactionstocurb（如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote）suchpractices.Inconclusion,allthesocietyshouldmakeactivelymoresustainedandconcertedefforts.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,apromisingstarthasbegun,andahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietymaybenotbefarbehind.
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Thislinechartpresentsthetrendofnumberofmuseumsandnumberofpeoplevisitingmuseumsfrom2013to2015.Fromthechart,itisobvioustofindoutthatthenumberofmuseumsfrom2013to2015presentsatrendofdecreaseandthenumberofpeoplevisitingmuseumsfrom2013to2015alsopresentsatrendofincrease.
Itisquiteclearforustotheconclusionthatthereasonforthisphenomenoncanbeattributedtothedevelopmentofeconomy.AsfarasIamconcerned,influencesonthenumberofmuseumsandnumberofpeoplevisitingmuseumsbyeconomicdevelopmentmainlydisplayinthefollowingaspects.Firstandforemost,economicdevelopmentresultsinmoreincomeforpeople,whichinturnallowspeopleaffordthepaymenttovisitmuseums.Moreover,Economicdevelopmentmakesmuseumsmorediversifiedandmoreabundantinquantity,whichcansatisfydiversifiedpreferenceofpeople.Finally,Economicdevelopmentmakesgovernmentinvestmoreonpublicmuseums,andthusmakeushavemorechancestovisitmuseums.
Frommyperspective,weshouldmaintainthepositivesideofmuseums,andtrytoeliminateitsnegativeside.Therefore,itcanprovidemorepositiveinfluenceonourdailylives.